28 Aralık 2009 Pazartesi

About Free Downloading

Thesis statement:I think we have legal right to download MP3,films, different flies and programs.
Supporting sentence 1:They are too high to purchase cds and dvds so we can't afford them.
Supporting sentence 2:Singers, actor and actress don't need to make profit that is gained from cd and dvd as they make profit from concerts and films.
Opponent sentence: Because of downloading programs isn't legal we shouldn't download them.We should pay for their effort.

1 yorum:

  1. How will you refute the opponents' idea? You should mention that.

    Moreover, you should mention why you have legal right to download in your thesis statement. Furthermore, you don't have the legal right for this.

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