Argumentative Statement

Thesis statement:We should have a suitable job that enables us to spare much time with our family.
Reason 1:If we work so much time we can not care for them properly as we can not spend so much time with them.
Reason 2:Money does not always mean everything.
Opponent's argument:For a better life,for our all kinds of needs we must earn and save so much money.So we must work so much.
Refutation for opponent's argument:A better life does not always mean to work so much.We can allow time both our family and our work.